| 2020-08-25 16:58:24 |
The Trucker's Load Pt. 2
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I wish that I was in Alex's place. I've longed for a lovely black dick up my arse for years, and for that sort of relationship, but never been so lucky. Reality stinks sometimes, but life could be worse, and i can always lose myself in a story like this. Keep 'em cumming, please. |
| 2020-08-25 18:55:08 |
The Landlord's Pet_(1)
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Loved it, having read it more than once, but it's begging for another chapter. Any chance please? |
| 2020-09-02 19:24:37 |
Tom's parallel world
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Well done. You certainly got my attention, and a continuation of this story would go down a storm. Don't make the mistake of padding a story out though, just to make it longer; if it doesn't need to be longer, then leave it alone, or risk boring your readers. |
| 2020-10-06 13:18:13 |
Lonely Night at the Gym
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Loved it - got me rock hard too, but then I'm a bi-sex transvestite anyway, so swinging both ways (including taking it) is nothing new. This story could easily stand a sequel or two as well - any chance?? |
| 2020-10-21 07:53:12 |
Warren and Harry
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I like where this is going - it has promise - but you do need to be more careful about whose perspective you are taking. Sometimes it's not clear, and you may take his, hers, or third party all in one paragraph. |