| 2015-02-07 21:31:59 |
Experimentation And Exploration Part 3
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You're doing a great job with this story, and I can't wait for the next one in the series. |
| 2015-04-04 22:08:31 |
California Zephyr
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Loved it. One or two errors, but it didn't spoil anything, and I'd love to see the story continued please. |
| 2017-08-22 15:21:49 |
Terra Byte
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A clever story, which appeals to the Science Fiction buff AND the romantic in me. Well done! |
| 2018-11-27 19:32:47 |
Three Generations of Pleasure and Passion
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A few careless errors - like being unable to decide if Grandma is called Ruth or June - but i still enjoyed it. Does anyone proofread your work? It doesn't seem like it, but I think that it would help make it a better read. Whatever you do, DON'T STOP WRITING!! |
| 2019-03-26 23:05:32 |
Interface
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The double spacing is definitely a distraction, but the story is excellent, nonetheless. Perhaps a little TOO technical, but it all hangs together very well, and some very nice touches. More please!! |