2014-11-16 20:38:42 |
The Debt - CAW 16
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You keep writing my friend, and I'll keep reading! |
2013-04-18 15:32:18 |
WHITE pt VI
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HOT, HOT HOT!! I really liked the way you carried conversations through as well. It flowed, made sense, and made me laugh too |
2015-02-07 20:12:39 |
The guy, the neighbor and the virgin part 1
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I don't know if you've had any experience of the situation in your story (as a Bi-TV, I have), but you certainly have a very nice touch, and I enjoyed it. I do hope that you'll follow it up please. |
2015-02-07 20:55:01 |
Experimentation and Exploration the beginning
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Ignore the comments about paragraphs. They would have helped, but you don't READ a gap between the groups of text, and I couldn't wait to get on with the story! |
2015-02-07 21:14:53 |
Experimentation and Exploration part 2
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You've got my tongue hanging out. Good job. |