| 2011-09-17 04:32:14 |
Mommy knows best part 1
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I really want to read the end to this! |
| 2013-08-14 16:14:50 |
DONNA_(2)
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To the above comment, thanks for the suggestion. If/when I write another story, I will follow your advice. FYI, I did properly indent, but when I cut and pasted, the indentation was lost. Maybe a tech geek can tell me what happened. Once again, I appreciate your advice and thanks for reading my story! Suzieq |
| 2013-08-15 13:15:13 |
The Youngest Sister
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I think many of these comments are mean! Yes, you need to improve on the mechanics, but your story was good. Good enough to get me wet! You keep working on your writing and don't get discouraged by vicious comments. Look at this way, does a boring story with great grammar get you off? Keep writing babe and I'll keep reading. |
| 2013-08-16 19:22:03 |
My Sister and I for the first time_(0)
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Excellent, I'm wet ! Keep writing, I want to know what happens next. Hurry! |
| 2013-08-16 19:42:31 |
Beasts and Besties - Part 1
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Occasionally lost, but you sure got me hot! |