| 2011-08-27 23:11:08 |
Like Old Times
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Thanks, yes I'm organizing the ideas now. |
| 2018-04-25 10:52:08 |
Help wanted part 9 (last) and The Shower
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You did a great job developing two believeable but unique characters. The playful dialog is delightful. |
| 2018-05-20 00:10:01 |
When My Dreams Came True. Chapter 4 and 5,
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93, I enjoyed the series, thanks for sharing it. I havea suggestion and an offer. You've been careful to use spell checking, but there are places where the wrong word is used. There are punctuation misses, too. If you want, I'd be glad to review your stories before you publish. PM me if you're interested. |
| 2019-10-15 03:35:29 |
Ernie`s first Time
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Jesus, can’t any of you young writers make a paragraph break? Your stories are fucking painful to read. You really should pay attention in class, basic writing is important. Unless you’re satisfied with having shitty jobs your whole life. |
| 2019-10-15 03:35:55 |
Ernie`s first Time
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Jesus, can’t any of you young writers make a paragraph break? Your stories are fucking painful to read. You really should pay attention in class, basic writing is important. Unless you’re satisfied with having shitty jobs your whole life. |