| 2011-07-15 07:16:51 |
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ah the evil tripple post bug strikes again, great work on the story |
| 2011-07-15 14:17:25 |
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ive got 666 reads funny right |
| 2011-07-16 00:17:56 |
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thanks for the feedback, you say you want more detail you got it check back in a day or two and ill have part 3 up, and to the guy 2 below yeah message me when your loged in and thanks everyone 4 the support |
| 2011-07-16 10:38:01 |
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hey everyone, i have decided that tomarrow i am takeing down thease stories and re-writeing them adding to them and makeing the plot more beliveable ect. and will also write the last 3 parts and put it all together in one complete story upload so if you have advice give it because i go back to the drawing board tomarrow |
| 2011-07-16 10:38:36 |
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hey everyone, i have decided that tomarrow i am takeing down thease stories and re-writeing them adding to them and makeing the plot more beliveable ect. and will also write the last 3 parts and put it all together in one complete story upload so if you have advice give it because i go back to the drawing board tomarrow |