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Comments from JadeM
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-10-18 09:36:33 | Unknown Presence - The Vessel | Hello! I left my comment on the forum page... but did not want to neglect to say here GREAT STORY!!!!! |
| 2012-10-18 10:02:50 | The Yellow Sign. | Well done my friend... well done:) |
| 2012-11-05 09:39:55 | Helena's Nightmare | Hi! I just got your PM and came directly to have a look.:) This is a wonderful story! You have a real talent... I cannot wait to see your next story as well;) |
| 2013-01-02 14:55:31 | Marie's Christmas | This was a lot of fun and really well done. I love the depth and development you gave to it:) |
| 2013-01-07 00:34:55 | A new day, a new me part 1 | This is you first story and a wonderful effort. You may find it easier for people to read by setting up your spacing differently:) If you go into the writers forum there is lots of great advice there you can look at. It also includes character development, advice on punctuation, grammar etc. Also, you may find it of use to have someone proof read your work. In the sex stories forum is information relating to this as well. You have a good story here, You can do a lot with it. You votes to this point should tell you that:) Hang in there, keep writing, and keep the stories coming. The fact you submitted the first means you are over the hardest part... daring to put your work out there:) |