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Comments from Jiggajames
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-05-17 20:41:14 | my soul mate never thought to be ( part 1 revised and re written | There's 3 more stories following this already and for those who haven't read the first version of part one be happy I redid it trust me and for the dude who said take an English class that's not a class for grammer its exactly the same as a reading if you wanted my writing to get better with caps and all of the doo-hikeys that's writing class and if your complaining about missing letters at the end of words the writing is in the style and pronunciation of modern day trends I know I'm one |
| 2012-05-19 12:19:27 | my soul mate never thought to be ( part 1 revised and re written | OK since so many people are complaining someone I.M. me on here and I'll gladly let you proof-read and fix any errors in another story iv been working on |
| 2012-05-19 12:19:54 | my soul mate never thought to be ( part 1 revised and re written | OK since so many people are complaining someone I.M. me on here and I'll gladly let you proof-read and fix any errors in another story iv been working on |
| 2012-06-12 04:50:57 | Her Taste | No offence but I felt like a robot reading this story I am-I'm We are-were I'm guessing your not from an English speaking country I liked it but you had no flow sentence to sentence |
| 2012-06-12 04:51:18 | Her Taste | No offence but I felt like a robot reading this story I am-I'm We are-were I'm guessing your not from an English speaking country I liked it but you had no flow sentence to sentence |