| 2012-12-30 12:10:30 |
Stepsister Seduction
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Great story. I look forward to future installments. Excellent detail. Stepsister sounds so hot. Keep up the good work. 100% in my opinion. |
| 2012-12-30 12:29:15 |
Stepsister Seduction Chapter 2: Mom came home
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Awesome continuation. Eagerly looking forward to reading part 3. Stepmom and stepsister sound fucking hot. Thanks for the story. |
| 2012-12-30 14:30:45 |
fucking a pregnant Elizabeth
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Good storyline. Like others said, draw out the details a little more. Definitely re-read several times before posting. Be descriptive with setting, dialogue, sensations, etc.... Strive to make the reader feel like they are watching this in person. Positive rating for a good story. |
| 2013-01-02 22:06:31 |
Nicole Part Three: Bowling Night
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You need to do a part 4 where Nicole gets pregnant. She sounds too hot to not get what she wants. Parts 1 - 3 are very arousing. |
| 2013-12-17 08:27:15 |
My Girlfriend's Daughter Makes A Move
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Plump girls are the best lovers. Great story. |