| 2012-12-30 13:27:12 |
Aliza and the dogs_(1)
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Spell checker, line breaks between paragraphs, and flesh out the story with some dialoge |
| 2012-12-31 02:05:51 |
Training_(2)
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Quit looking at porn if your other church members don't like you doing. Guilty concience much? I have NO problem keeping my fantasies out of my sex life with my partners. Trust me, I'm a hippie, and I hang out with hippies. Chomos deserve death, and I believe that with my whole heart. |
| 2013-01-09 17:07:07 |
The Collar
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I should have stuck a non-erotic tag onto this piece. I will on the next one. Not much sex in there, either, but I like the concept of it. |
| 2013-05-20 11:33:48 |
The Collar 2
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I think part of the problem is that everyone thinks Brian and Lilly are scientists. Nope. Lilly is the closest, but even she is just a researcher's assistant. Brian is an electrical engineer, sure, but he was a glorified grunt on an assembly line before. This is just a stroke story. |
| 2013-05-19 11:30:47 |
The Collar 2
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Just so you don't lose hope, Lilly puts the Collar on two of her college interns while Brian is gone, and that's what he comes home to find, with Lilly gone out of the house. He spent the day being nice, so he deserves a little playtime, don't you think? He does. I like the idea of unintended consequences, too. I can't really even SEE the ending yet. Got any ideas? |