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Comments from Impax
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-04-12 07:02:11 | Twins, Ch 3 | There could be more to this story if I get some feedback asking for it. Otherwise, I could leave it go right where it is. |
| 2011-04-12 16:58:17 | Sister Tease | Sorry about the mistakes. I don't have an editor. Plus, it was my first ever story I ever wrote. I'm seeing improvements as I go, so it's not like they are getting worse. And at least I know how to yoose a spel cheker |
| 2011-04-13 02:36:10 | Twins, Ch 1 | Could you not tell by her actions and attitude the Adriana is the "older" of the two? Perhaps not. If so, then I failed when writing this. I thought it would be obvious. Sorry. |
| 2011-04-13 02:53:57 | Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 1 – 6th Year Begins | I have just started writing and publishing here myself. Please do us a favor and don't underline everything, and the second post was quite correct. The characters acted out of character. Other than those two points, this was a pretty good story, and I would encourage you to keep them coming. Maybe not fanfiction next time, but a fantasy straight out of your own head? You will get fewer harsh critiques that way, I bet. |
| 2011-04-14 00:48:25 | The Touch_(1) | I didn't see any formatting problems. Could you enlighten me? I'll try to do better in future. |