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Comments from Rutger5
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-12-12 17:52:01 | Gift Unwrapping | Very good story! The two leads were likable and generally believable, especially the way many characters act fake in stories. An overall good job. r5 |
| 2011-12-16 17:41:09 | The Gift of Life (CAW #9) | Story is well wrtten for the most part. You did kind of feel the ending (or a similar one) was coming with hints and clues. My big problem was, like another commenter mentioned, the lack of her family being there including on the day of a possibly fatal operation. Plus since it appeared she was happy in her life as a whole the fact that she cheated so casually kind of threw me.Maybe she is a ho but I think at the least her kids should have seen her before the operation. r5 |
| 2011-12-23 12:44:29 | Hanging My Neighbor's Holiday Lights | I don't usually comment on my own stories but two things. 1. Kingof rejects- once someone writes something they own the copyright whether they take the additional steps or not of registering it. That makes it easier to prove but isn't necessary - research it if you like or I could send you links. 2. As some other commenters pointed out to those who didn't read carefully enough he was married 6 months after high school and 23 years later sold house-he was now over 40. Affair started in December & in February she said she was pregnant. Peace :-) |
| 2012-01-02 13:03:20 | Chante-Booze, Weed & Sex | Put bigger breaks between paragraphs to make it easier to read. |
| 2012-01-10 17:41:20 | Positive vote due to the italics. No, not really but positive vote nonetheless. |