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Comments from Rutger5
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-10-25 15:00:03 | I'm Horny, Aren't You? —Part II | Overall I liked the story, the two main characters are somewhat amoral in their treatment of others but that is why it is called cheating. Just a minor quibble. Not enoug breaks between paragraphs, there are some but it is somewhat block of text like. But I give it a positive vote for thestory. |
| 2011-11-10 15:46:00 | Grave Robber | Awesome as ever, it might be my favorite of yours. I could see Tim Burton turning this into a movie. |
| 2011-11-10 15:57:25 | Little Rod Riding Hard | Just a piece of advice, double or triple space your breaks between paragraphs to make it more readable.Also many prefer if spoken dialog is seperate from the paragraphs, will help you get more reads that way. Since I like reimagined fairy tales I will give it a positve vote r5 |
| 2011-11-17 07:56:02 | Big Bull Daddy in Law Pt 2 | That is one naughty family.Cheers! |
| 2011-11-26 18:54:50 | Bela Lugosi's Dead | Excellent story plus it made me laugh I must say. Love the title as I'm a big Bela fan but the only thing that would have made it better was if you had Pete Steele in the band on stage. r5 |