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Comments from achimvw
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-08-04 07:34:15 | Brittany | You do know that there is more to this story by Steve Jensen. |
| 2012-08-13 07:46:52 | My Pretty Little Slaves -- Chapter 6 ? Girls at school, Preparing for the Wedding, and a Special Surprise | Not sure what car dealers you deal with but your mark downs are way off the mark. You need to do some spell checking: The contraction of you are is you're,not your. You also have a habbit of dropping the y on the word they, and dropping the d on the word and. You need to add the quotation marks on your sentences that are denoting conversations. |
| 2012-10-07 00:11:20 | Sister's Trick | This is a Frank McCoy Story. |
| 2012-10-07 00:11:43 | In Your Sister | This is a Frank McCoy story. |
| 2012-10-15 06:46:09 | My friends daughter and a kiss | Please continue. Also maintain a current tense in the story. |