| 2018-09-16 03:16:32 |
Behind Her Blue Eyes_(1)
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I hate to say it, but I can see her breaking his heart from the clues you've given us. A very well constructed story that I'll look forward to reading in the future. Good job. |
| 2018-09-16 03:16:40 |
Behind Her Blue Eyes_(1)
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I hate to say it, but I can see her breaking his heart from the clues you've given us. A very well constructed story that I'll look forward to reading in the future. Good job. |
| 2020-10-20 00:11:29 |
You Should Have Listened to Your Mother
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For some reason the word "***********" has been deleted in two paragraphs early in the story. I don't know why and I didn't do or ask for it. Senorlongo |