| 2010-11-05 17:55:41 |
My One and Only
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The story had paragraphs when I wrote it. Apparently when I cut/pasted to upload that disappeared. I'll see if i can edit. |
| 2010-11-05 20:04:13 |
Amish Devil\'s Ohio
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Interesting--you changed styles completely in midstream. Like you would do if you were copying text and changing it as you went. then when you picked up later on forgot what you were doing the first time. Also, did you never hear about PROOFREADING? There are so many typos here it's ridiculous. |
| 2010-11-06 21:18:04 |
Amish Devil\'s Ohio
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Actually, I have two stories posted now. One should not make assumptions. |
| 2010-11-08 12:23:16 |
My One and Only
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Re: the prior comment--I didn't know if she was a virgin or not. I only know there was no hymen. It could have been sex with another guy, masturbating with a hairbrush, or anything. I only know there was no resistance when I first penetrated her. |
| 2010-11-17 12:55:33 |
Just a Dream
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Reminds me of soft core TV porn. Also, too wordy. |