| 2010-10-28 09:00:30 |
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I HAVE TO SAY THE COMMENTS WERE MORE ENTERTAINING THAN YOUR STORY DON'T GET ME WRONG I GET WHAT THE STORY'S ABOUT I THINK SOME OF YOUR WORKS ARE GREAT BUT THIS ONE NOT SO MUCH THE AGES ARE WRONG THE ERRORS YOU COULD REDO OR NOT JUST SAYING THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU |
| 2010-10-29 08:06:45 |
The Evacuee part 2
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EARLIER POST BY YOUR TRULY |
| 2010-10-29 08:17:00 |
The Evacuee chapter 4
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NOW DAVID HAS A FEW.TRICKS UP HIS SLEEVE HE CAN SHOW BETH BUT I THINK SHE'S LONG GONE GOOD STORY LIKE THE WAY THINGS PROGRESS THANKS FOR SHARING READING ON |
| 2010-11-02 23:25:53 |
Becoming a man
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SHORT AND UNBELIEVING |
| 2010-11-02 23:44:31 |
Shaun's Story
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YES, GREAT START. WHAT HAPPENED MONSTER JUMPED THRU YOUR WINDOW AND FINISHED STORY AFTER HE ATE DANIEL WHILE YOU WERE PUKING. REDO YOU HAVE POTENTIAL IN A WEIRD WAY |