| 2010-10-27 10:02:51 |
The Evacuee
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GOOD STORY FELT REAL WHICH IS ALWAYS A PLUS DAVID AND BETH SEEM EAGER TO PLEASE ONE ANOTHER I LIKE HOW THE STORY GREW INNOCENT AND SWEET AND THIS IS HOW MOST LEARN ABOUT THE BIRDS AND BEES REALLY ENJOYED IT THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO PART II |
| 2010-10-27 10:03:34 |
The Evacuee
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GOOD STORY FELT REAL WHICH IS ALWAYS A PLUS DAVID AND BETH SEEM EAGER TO PLEASE ONE ANOTHER I LIKE HOW THE STORY GREW INNOCENT AND SWEET AND THIS IS HOW MOST LEARN ABOUT THE BIRDS AND BEES REALLY ENJOYED IT THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO PART II |
| 2010-10-27 10:10:03 |
The Evacuee
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GOOD STORY FELT REAL WHICH IS ALWAYS A PLUS DAVID AND BETH SEEM EAGER TO PLEASE ONE ANOTHER I LIKE HOW THE STORY GREW INNOCENT AND SWEET AND THIS IS HOW MOST LEARN ABOUT THE BIRDS AND BEES REALLY ENJOYED IT THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO PART II |
| 2010-10-28 08:13:24 |
My Life - young boys fool around
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GOOD READ LIKED THE BOY/BOY EXPERIMENTATION LOVED THE FACT THAT THEY WERE SO ACCEPTING OF ONE ANOTHER THAT'S WHAT HIT ME THE MOST GOOD INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS LIKED THE FLOW OF THE STORY THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU |
| 2010-10-28 08:59:24 |
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I HAVE TO SAY THE COMMENTS WERE MORE ENTERTAINING THAN YOUR STORY DON'T GET ME WRONG I GET WHAT THE STORY'S ABOUT I THINK SOME OF YOUR WORKS ARE GREAT BUT THIS ONE NOT SO MUCH THE AGES ARE WRONG THE ERRORS YOU COULD REDO OR NOT JUST SAYING THANKS FOR SHARING LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU |