| 2011-05-18 02:45:48 |
Dad and his Girls
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Thanks for the comments so far. I really do need to work on my spelling and Grammar. I am dyslexic so I tend to get words and things mixed up. I am going to try much harder for the next one tho. Any thoughts on where the stories would like to go in the future. I have some Ideas. R.E the Psychic/Physic thing. I just spell checked blindly. Apologies |
| 2011-05-19 02:29:55 |
Dad and his Girls
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Thanks again for the comments everyone. I had the girls in my head at about those ages. But the reason I left it blank was for the reader to fill in for themselves. That's why I left the descriptions of them vaguer too. Ive started on the second instalment after getting such good feed back. After reading a few times I can see what I need to change. |
| 2011-07-11 08:29:41 |
A Summer Friendship Part 2
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Really nice story devoloping. I cant wait to read the rest. |
| 2011-07-12 08:28:41 |
Me and Milly - Part 3: Her House
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Any thoughts on where the series could go? Would love to hear thoughts. |
| 2011-08-01 07:47:51 |
Caught II
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Absolutly fantastic. I always think there isnt enough Mon/Son stories on here. You going to do a 3rd part? |