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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-08-03 18:34:01 | Vacation at the beach | "Mom just held her hand out to Sarah, “come on, lets get this stiff picked up and go back to the house.” You're Freudian slip is showing man! :P Great writing, hot word pictures that puts the reader right into the action. I like your style and approach. Keep it up. (Is that not possible?) |
| 2010-12-30 23:58:06 | WHAT WONDERS WEED WORKS ON MOM | Terrific story structure. Well described characters that are highly believable. I favor serendipity like this where unexpected opportunity meets human nature in a common setting. It is not a stretch to accept the circumstances of their coupling like many of the stories posted here. You have an excellent ground set of characters to build on. Weaving the mother's past before marriage and her unfulfilled desires could bring much heat to her affair with her son. Good start. Can't wait to see more! |
| 2010-12-30 23:59:12 | WHAT WONDERS WEED WORKS ON MOM | Terrific story structure. Well described characters that are highly believable. I favor serendipity like this where unexpected opportunity meets human nature in a common setting. It is not a stretch to accept the circumstances of their coupling like many of the stories posted here. You have an excellent ground set of characters to build on. Weaving the mother's past before marriage and her unfulfilled desires could bring much heat to her affair with her son. Good start. Can't wait to see more! |
| 2011-04-11 17:38:21 | A Family Thing part 1 | Tremendous writing. All good writers keep their stories in 3 or 4 sentences per paragraph at most. Your scene "flowed" (boy did it) and you characters and descriptions are well thougth out. I am just dicovering you and will read all your stories. Great work! |
| 2011-04-11 18:02:45 | A Family Thing part 2 | A nice twist at the end. It's obvious that Liv had fantasized for a long time about her father and never saw him as her father. She wanted him as the perfect man. Her not calling her Daddy doesn't take away a bit from the story. It is his shock and his reaction that makes this a unique incest story. I like that as a change of pace from all the other tired story lines available at this site. |