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Comments from Efon
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-05-18 08:50:53 | A One Time 3 of a Kind (part 2) | Stretch it out. Sex stories are like candy, make it last and fill in all the sugary goodness with details and adjectives. EX: I liked your story. VS: Your story gave me tingles and I felt like I was there in the room with you. |
| 2011-05-18 08:58:50 | Palin's Problem | Should have used Hillary since Bill's not given her any. |
| 2011-05-18 09:06:40 | Just friends? | I found you have to use two blank lines to format correctly here. But otherwise great. |
| 2011-05-18 09:10:29 | Helping the teacher | Needs better formating and make it longer, but nice. |
| 2011-05-18 09:34:08 | Big Brother Bodyguard ch2 | Please put a line between different character's dialog, but good story so far. Part 3? |