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Comments from Efon
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-07-03 10:55:04 | New Rules 1_(0) | Sorry, but this seems to contrived and agreeable to everyone. Would rather have seen it all be a big secret of who's cheating with whom the whole trip. |
| 2011-07-05 12:08:11 | bank robbery | Please fix to be readable. Paragraphs and grammar. |
| 2011-07-05 12:14:07 | the bike ride | This was your best story so far, please continue. |
| 2011-07-05 12:50:19 | My first love - part 6 | This has been a great series, and I love the love story. Suggestions: Every love story has it's rocky moments, and teens are not know for good decisions or faithfulness. Any more players getting into "sticky" situations with the characters? |
| 2011-07-06 15:52:03 | Sister's drunken party | I loved the premise and the plot, but wished for more details and emotion. It felt rushed. 7/10 |