| 2010-06-29 22:41:36 |
Sara - Mom
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Sorry, I couldn't get past the first paragraph. This is terribly written. |
| 2011-08-28 20:36:49 |
skinny dipping gone bad
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I'm sorry, this is so badly written I can't get past the first couple of paragraphs. It takes more than a good story line to write, it takes, at least, a moderate command of the English language and a spell check. Come on! |
| 2011-09-26 13:01:22 |
But honey, it was just a dance
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Only one comment? Was she cheating or wasn't she, what do you think? |
| 2011-10-02 21:04:50 |
Bill and Amber
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Thank you, that's always nice to hear. Part 2 has been submitted. I hope you enjoy it just as much. Part 3, (the conclusion) will follow shortly. |
| 2011-10-15 15:56:58 |
Bill and Amber, The Reunion
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Wow! Thank you all, for your unbelievably nice comments. They are greatly appreciated. |