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Comments from Don'sdick
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-11-27 04:58:51 | To good to be true | Fine, believable story. The anonymous comment below is written by an idiot. I've written 3 novels and would never post shit house comments like his. Maybe that's why he only has enough balls to post as 'anonymous'. Yes, the formatting could be better... Yes, it never hurts to proofread, more than once... It may even help for a friend to read and critique before posting. The 'anonymous' commenter (evidently) considers himself as being a REAL writer. Real writers encourage, NOT discourage. Thank you for the story... and the release my nuts needed. p.s. It's hard for a man to write from a woman's perspective.. |
| 2014-11-27 04:24:29 | sex on High School | Once again, good story but could be better. Spacing will help most readers. I've read all three stories you've posted. I like them, and would like them to be longer. Maybe a little more detail when having sex. I'd like to work with you on your stories... maybe have a little fuck while doing so. I'm in Texas. PM me on my Don'sdick page if you might be interested. Again, Keep writing. Oh, Yes, You're a young woman. Write from a woman's perspective... you know more about what you're talking about. |
| 2013-04-04 11:38:20 | Daddy's Game | WOW.. it's hard to believe this is your first story, young lady. I say 'young lady' because I'm much older than your posted age. This is a very good story and well written. You might re-read your script slowly and correct any errors next time. As with most dirty old men, like me, I mainly concentrate on the action in the story itself. This one had me jerking off right away, and I'll read it again when I need to cum again. Thank you.. |
| 2013-04-04 11:52:02 | To the girl from inverness... fuck him. It's never too early to begin loving sex. Just be careful of pregnancy for a couple more years. | |
| 2014-11-26 06:52:48 | Becky_(1) | WOW! Good one! |