| 2010-06-17 13:03:25 |
The Cheater Vol 2 - Caught in the Act
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Check out the next one, A Woman's Touch |
| 2010-08-22 17:05:09 |
Tommy and Jade
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Awsome, you have to continue that. |
| 2010-10-30 05:26:00 |
Fucked Dry
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Loved it. I have little experience (and what I do have is pretty poor) with this writing and short stories like that really give me a point in the right direction. I'd love to hear more! |
| 2010-11-04 16:01:19 |
Taryn's a whore
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For all the themes you've added I would've thought it would be longer but I'm underwhelmed by what happened in it. How could this kid get a girlfriend if this is what his mind works like? It just doesn't seem realistic. |