| 2010-04-28 10:06:49 |
Appetite for incest 2
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The two stories so far, if they are completely true, then you need to stick to that style. I suppose what you type so far is very hot and interesting. So, if you want to keep this style, just continue typing what ACTUALLY happened instead of trying to fit in popular fiction demands. All the best :D |
| 2010-04-29 10:36:24 |
A Different Kind of Love
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This story is very well crafted. However, it's too much on the romantic side than on the porn side. I enjoyed the last sex bits along with the whole prelude to it. But perhaps you could use your skill in writing more erotic stories. Great read. All the best :) |
| 2012-06-26 15:47:29 |
My Sister In Law Beth_(1)
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Beautiful work buddy. The frankness is great! |