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Comments from WantSumCandyLittleGirl
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-07-15 19:50:40 | And The Dog Made Three PT8 | You did a great job of plagarizing this from the same book in the Pet Book Series, authored by David Crane and published in August of 1986. So - tell me, why are you trying to pass this off as your own work? |
| 2010-07-15 19:51:15 | And The Dog Made Three PT9 | You did a great job of plagarizing this from the same book in the Pet Book Series, authored by David Crane and published in August of 1986. So - tell me, why are you trying to pass this off as your own work? |
| 2010-07-15 19:51:39 | And The Dog Made Three PT 10 | You did a great job of plagarizing this from the same book in the Pet Book Series, authored by David Crane and published in August of 1986. So - tell me, why are you trying to pass this off as your own work? |
| 2010-07-21 10:12:47 | Alice the slut just wants cock! | Ok, let's start with the obvious - bad spacing, bad grammar, bad spelling. Now, the story. Obvious attempt at a take off on the Twilight movies and theme, and it didn't work. Go back to the writing pad, start over, and use an editor. Then make sure the storyline flows better. |
| 2010-07-21 10:33:46 | Sara - Cristina's first Time | Good story line, but as you said, English isn't your first language. If you ask, I'm sure there are many here who would be willing to help you making your stories read better. Good work, hope you post more. |