| 2021-03-13 01:02:42 |
Cabin of Temptation Part 1: Chapter 1 - Driving with Alexis
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Excellent beginning. Only one small issue: after driving for hours, there is no way the hood of the car would have been cool enough to her to lay back on and get fucked. Now, if you’d said the trunk... |
| 2021-03-16 15:23:17 |
Cabin of Temptation Part 1: Chapter 4 - Dancing with Nat
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TheDevilsOwn is right. You should have used shuddered, not shuttered. Otherwise, great story and plot. Looking forward to the next chapters in this saga. Even when Sydney gets involved. |
| 2021-04-13 19:39:17 |
Her Deepest Desire
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Nice story, though there were a few grammatical issues. Nothing distracting, though. The ending begs the question: will she use him again? |
| 2021-04-13 19:40:09 |
Her Deepest Desire
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Nice story, though there were a few grammatical issues. Nothing distracting, though. The ending begs the question: will she use him again? |
| 2021-04-23 12:50:11 |
Sex With My Boyfriend's Family
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Are you even old enough to be on this site? Do us all a favor - go away. Far far away. |