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Date Story title Comment
2020-08-27 20:40:53 young fern part one Numerous spelling mistakes: subtle not scuttle (as in sink a ship), scent not sent (as in a package), crotch not crutch (as in support for broken leg). Perhaps a good proofreading is in order
2020-09-26 14:54:11 New Neighbor - Lessons End The story plot of all three chapter was excellent. That Pops Tom his time and allowed his girls to enjoy themselves was great.

However, you really need to work on spelling, grammar, and overall paragraph formatting. Yeah, I’m one of ‘those’ that prefers writers use proper writing skills.
2020-09-26 15:52:59 Reuniting with old classmates It’s emanated from her body, not eliminated.
2020-10-10 18:38:21 Redemption. Nice plot and story line. As James_Gina said, a few typos, but not distracting from the story. I’d suggest using Grammarly to help. It’s not perfect, but it does catch most little things.
2020-10-14 12:13:30 A substitute teacher meets show and tell pets. Another example of middle school students trying to be grown up. Do us all a favor: grow the fuck up, learn proper grammar, punctuation, and plot development before submitting anymore garbage.
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