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Comments from WantSumCandyLittleGirl
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-08-18 15:56:29 | Vera:Susan's Surprise | Not bad - pretty well written, although there were a few grammatical issues. Nothing to be concerned about, but next time, try to keep the transitions a little more separated. You moved too quickly between scenes a couple times. Outside that, looking forward to reading more. |
| 2010-08-18 16:01:41 | A Road Trip with My Grand Daughter | Good story and glad you posted. Well written and deserves more chapters. Thanks for letting us in on your fantasies. |
| 2010-08-19 09:24:16 | Good writing - but way too perverted for my tastes. Next time, try to keep the kids at least of an age to be able to make good choices as to whether or not to participate. | |
| 2010-08-19 10:29:40 | the war god's bride | Very well written. You have quite a talent. And the battle rages still - what an excellent line. |
| 2010-08-19 14:27:37 | Oh Daddy | Awesome story, very well written. The plot and execution was simply one of the best I have read on this site ever. And the ending, never saw it coming. Thanks so much. |