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Comments from A55Man
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2010-05-09 13:21:16 | A Very Difficult Daughter | One of the best I've read. The characters are fleshed out and realistic, and the narrative keeps moving along in a logical progression that kept me reading all the way through, and made me anticipate a sequel, which I happily saw was also posted. Thanks for a great story. |
2010-05-09 13:23:41 | A Very Difficult Daughter - Chap 2 - "It's your body Sally" | Great continuation in the series! I particularly liked the "cliff-hanger" ending. You make me want to keep writing myself, so I can get to this level. Thanks! |
2010-05-10 15:03:23 | Love at Second Sight | Well done. If this is an example of what I have to measure my own work against, I see I have quite a lot of work to do to improve my skills. |
2010-05-28 15:58:30 | Girl with no name at a music festival | I liked this. Not too long, but set-up nicely. Good job. |