| 2009-10-17 17:20:28 |
Moonlight and Roses
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Shame to have to come down to Earth after that... |
| 2009-10-23 14:27:30 |
Desire_(4)
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Your poems are epic...a bit dark at times, but epic...good stuff... |
| 2009-11-09 20:08:44 |
Young Lust, First Lust. Sweet Devotion.
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I didn't think hardcore sexual descriptions belonged in a 'first time' story...that is why I wrote it the way I did...the story is largely true...completely up until the phone call, then it becomes a composite...Exakta66... |
| 2009-11-19 04:40:51 |
Black Candles
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I agree with Pete...I thought it nice too...Exakta66... |
| 2009-11-19 04:47:06 |
Cherished
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I agree with Piquet...nice poem...you need to structure it...but you are good with words...you have talent...nice job... |