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2013-05-06 01:57:42 Three Can Keep a Secret if Two are...Angry Damn, I can't wait for the real reason why she can't go "yet". This feels like the third to last chapter in the series. Am I right? :)
2014-06-16 20:55:09 The Best Therapy ch. 03 Sir, we need an update ASAP. You don't just cut off good series like this all of a sudden. You'll hurt your readers.
2014-06-04 05:23:02 Used by parents Thank you, anonymous.
2013-07-04 02:29:24 Surprise Birthday Party_(1) The overall spirit of the story is good, but you failed in the execution. Yes, all the sex stuff is hot - m/d, f/d, humiliation, etc. - but the glue between them is very unconvincing.

Try rewriting it. Keep the general plot, but make the development more realistic.
2013-07-16 02:09:17 Bottom Eporations-The Intimacies of Anal, Enema and Spanking (Book Two) You've got talent. You should further this story line.
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