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Comments from NeroVV
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-07-07 03:58:29 | Terrific execution of an unusual concept. Bravo. | |
| 2010-07-07 04:23:04 | Vacation at the beach | Some very horny bits, like the tongue on dick sequence, but then other parts were rushed and seemed incomplete. Recommend you take a little more time with a final draft on your next story, you're almost there. |