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Comments from Purple Chick
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-07-01 03:54:39 | Young Exploration Part 2 | Klaxx, Yeah, its getting a lil raunchy, which is somewhat arousing, in the right context. If you mean by the use of language, I mean. If you mean the hints of incest, etc, that's not going to happen. This is not an incest story, not in the slightest. I'm not sure exactly what you're thinking is degrading, per se, but if you tell me, I'll gladly look at it, and clear it up. As a woman, I'm not predisposed to write stories degrading women. Thank you for your comments and opinions, both positive and negative! I really enjoy truly constructive criticism because it helps me write better. Thank you very much. Purple Chick |
| 2009-07-01 05:08:29 | Watching Little Casey Next Door | One of the better stories I've read on this site, I enjoyed the little build up and seduction of Mr. Dan by Casey. It was a little fast and gratuitious for my taste, but overall, a good story, with only the occasional technical errors. I believe if you keep writing, you'll only improve, and get better. My comments are meant to be positive and constructive criticism, and I hope you take them that way. Look forward to seeing more from you! Purple Chick |
| 2012-02-21 03:46:44 | Young Exploration Part 2 | *LOL* There's lots more to come, I've just had some health issues to deal with the past while, so I haven't been able to write as often. Technically, there was no actual incest in the story so far, just they had a light discussion about what could be. *LOL* But really, glad you're enjoying! |
| 2012-02-21 21:12:21 | Young Exploration Part 2 | And there is no incest planned for this story, either. Its not intended as that type of story. I hope you enjoyed it all the same! |
| 2012-02-21 21:29:36 | Harry Potter: Hermione's Good Fortune | I really enjoyed it. Hope to see more in this vein |