| 2009-02-16 12:05:20 |
First Time With Sarah
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Excellent story. I agree with the buildup comments, but it still flowed very naturally. Kepp up the good work. I am new to posting stories here too..give mine a read if u can. It is called Across the Way 1 & 2 |
| 2009-08-06 15:03:37 |
Party toy part 1
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Very good story Mini...I cant wait to read part two...got my blood flowing wishing I was one of the ones who were your birthday present. |
| 2011-09-17 15:41:48 |
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I think this was an excellent story. Keep up the good work. |
| 2011-09-17 15:43:35 |
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It is hard to believe this is your first story. Very well written. |
| 2011-10-15 17:01:45 |
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Wonderful story as usual. I wold expect nothing less from you sexy girl. |