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Comments from seeminglysatisfied
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2009-11-16 00:25:22 | Virgins are losers | "i started feeling a little bit pissed off so i went in my room, closed the door and turned off the lights. of course i still had my nightlight in though. i turned my ipod on and just like i had practiced i used swift, defined hand movements each time I browsed for a song to play. i turned on my favorite playlist: nickelback, hinder and puddle of mudd, all good songs of the new age." I gave it a positive for fuck's sake. One of the most random stories on the site. This and the guy that gets abducted by aliens. |
| 2009-11-16 00:36:01 | The prinicpals office? | "since school was cancelled that day i wnet home to check out my new playing card. i heard a noise again, kind of like the one i heard this morning (note: this is known as continuity, its a good technique for stories that you other authors might want to pay attention to). then i heard a voice "oooooooo" it was a ghost. it was actually the girl from the bus much to my surprise she wasnt angry. she said "invite over your friends i want to have an orgy" but i told her the truth i dont have any friends and today was the day i would commit suicide because i found out i was gay too. she said its fine to be gay, but since she was a ghost i should kill myself so we can have sex." shit, thank god i understand dark humor if you are still around, write another story most random stories...well one of |
| 2009-11-16 00:58:13 | Not horrible. I agree about the repetitive mentioning of age, other than that it wasn't bad at all | |
| 2009-11-18 16:21:29 | READER 2009-11-17 23:24:45 Poor sentence structure. Try explaining yourself on that one. And where are your stories??? |
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| 2009-11-25 16:23:30 | Noel | Brilliant literary work:) Really moved me. Pulled at my heart. Loved every detail. Thank you |