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Comments from Mark Cane
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2024-03-19 11:16:29 | Flo’s Dream | So, you are interested in European history as well as naughty stories! Of course Flo was quite right. After WW1, many women were left without any prospect of marrying. There really was a shortage of men. A fun story, imaginatively written. BTW, I am about to post my first story on this site. Look out for Angie and The Enchanted Dildo! |
| 2024-03-20 13:30:10 | katherine begins her journey pt. 1 | Hi Kittysub, I enjoyed reading your story. You have got off to a good start. I look forward to discovering how the adventure develops. I have only just joined this site. It is exciting to follow other writers fantasies. |
| 2024-03-20 13:43:20 | katherine meets her Daddy pt. 2 | The de***********ions are good. Just one suggestion on style if you don’t mind. You should make your paragraphs shorter. It makes it easier on the eye, if the paragraphs are briefer. Always start a new paragraph when a person says something. |
| 2024-03-20 14:34:32 | katherine learns the truth pt. 3 | A good story. It is fun and exciting to read other people’s fantasies. Probably best kept as fantasies, rather than trying it in real life. I would like to know more about the things that turn you on. |
| 2024-03-20 16:03:42 | Wolf Trap, Part One | A great story, beautifully written. Although a fantasy, the coupling is very believable and arousing. You have clearly researched your subject! |