| 2022-08-03 16:54:30 |
Niki Comes of Age - Part 1 of 4
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Excellent story. Love you ability to paint an image and the detail is terrific. Much better writing than most that I have read on this site. |
| 2022-08-03 21:48:02 |
Payback
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I don't normally like the incest stories, but this one was very well done and highly entertaining. |
| 2022-08-15 16:03:50 |
Kate gets broken in
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Great tension and love the detail. I like the pace of the story as well. Makes for a quick read. |
| 2022-08-26 03:37:30 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 5
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It looks like I am late to the party. Really a shame you didn’t continue the story. I know you had issues with the site and maybe some of the comments, but that leaves the rest of us loyal readers wanting. While I thought the story overall wandered a little bit and the airplane scene might be a little unrealistic, the overall writing was extremely compelling and definitely drew the reader in. Excellent character development and no question you have a unique style. I hope you eventually come back to it. You are letting the bad guys win. Much thanks for all of the effort. The amount of time you put into it shows and one of the best stories I’ve read on the site. |
| 2022-08-26 03:41:22 |
Sarah's Submission: Chapter 01 - Introducing Sarah
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I’d love to hear some comments from readers on what they like and don’t like. Happy to respond to PMs as well if you don’t feel comfortable leaving a public comment. |