| 2015-03-20 15:21:29 |
The Handsome Man Next Door
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A great story and very well done. A young woman on the brink of discovering her sexuality, enticing an older man to take her, teach her. A fantasy incarnate for us older guys. Thank you |
| 2017-03-15 02:21:19 |
SLAVE MOM SONIA RAPED BY HER OWN SONS CH. 4: SOLD TO A FOOTBALL TEAM
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I really can't emphasize how deeply disappointed I am in this and the other chapters. |
| 2019-05-11 14:45:08 |
Injured Step Sister
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Yes I did have it posted here a few years ago and removed it. This is an edited repost. I do not post any stories except those written by me. |
| 2019-05-18 14:57:47 |
Jailbait
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A very good story. Well written, with a believable story arch and characters that come to life. I tip my hat to you Sir. |
| 2019-07-09 21:13:06 |
Clone a cock
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The premise of this story is fabulous. The construction and continuity not so much. There are to many unexplained or unsubstantiated things happening. Put more time into completeing the story line. With more work this will be not just a good erotic story but a fantastic story in it's own right. |