| 2022-03-21 16:10:30 |
HUSBAND'S BOSS - PT 4 - SON'S TURN AFTER NIGHT OUT WITH BEN
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Talkdtm - this is actually a very fair criticism. I've noticed this, myself, when re-reading my stories. I tend to over-use the words describing cock and boob size, when they've probably already done their job earlier in the set up. I plan to work on this in future stories. |
| 2024-08-19 19:19:02 |
MY NEIGHBOR COMES TO MY RESCUE
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LOL... that's a great story... maybe you should take a stab at fleshing it out and publishing it on XNXX... pretty sexy!! |
| 2024-10-14 15:24:09 |
DIVORCED MOTHER DISCOVERS YOUNG COCK AT THE COUNTRY CLUB - PART 2 - SHE GIVES HIM A KEY TO HER APARTMENT
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Thanks, Duck. |
| 2024-10-29 15:58:14 |
BEST MAN FUCKS BRIDE DURING BACHELORETTE PARTY
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LOL... it's not a story about nobility, alandee... it's a story about fucking and getting fucked, set against a bachelor/bachelorette party. It should be enjoyed... not critiqued! Anyway, I hope you liked the story. |