| 2020-06-03 19:06:36 |
Revenge, Pt 18: Valentine's Day
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I was disapointed that Steven didn't expand on his conquests with Becky, Lissie, Alice or even Rose. Maybe you can be persuaded to do so in additional chapters? |
| 2020-06-04 02:58:41 |
THE HOTEL_(7)
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When I read a story I wantit to reachout and grab me. This story started to reach, but it didn't even begin to grab me. |
| 2020-06-05 00:51:09 |
An Incest Birthday Chapter 21
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FIX IT!!! |
| 2020-07-05 21:57:06 |
The Taking of a White Family – Part 2 – Parents Lean Their Place, the Punishment
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I am very disappointed that you have shown no commitment to the readers of your stories. It would be like having sex with a beautiful woman and just when you are about to get your nut she gets out of bed, gets dressed and leaves you unsatisfied. |
| 2020-07-12 08:08:10 |
Jack and Jessie (Revised)
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It was great, please continue. |