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Comments from boober70
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2022-10-16 12:05:52 | A Game Of Inches - Conclusion - Epilogue | Amazingly well written piece that was both touching and erotic. Well developed characters that were plausible as were the situations. The only negative for me was that I feel it could have gone on for longer - just seemed to get finished up too quick. Overall 10 out of 10 for me though. Thanks Rhiannon57 |
| 2022-10-16 12:15:15 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 02 - Indoctrination (1) | Great work on these first couple of chapters. Well thought out characters that behave as you might expect. Personally I like that the tags relate to the whole story and not individual chapters as you are not writing a single stroke piece but creating a story. Let's give Sarah what she needs... |
| 2022-10-16 12:17:14 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 03 - Bad Girls Get Punished | Good girl forced to be bad story or is it? I think Sarah may be enjoying this despite being forced into it. Not only is she turning a great submissive but given the right circumstances can be dominant too. Loving it so far. Thanks |
| 2022-10-17 05:55:59 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 05 - Anal Training | Great storyline. Who doesn't love some anal training and a 2 on 1. Sarah is being trained to be the perfect slut. No idea why voting is so low, makes no sense to me. Only small negative is that things move on a pace every chapter but I understand this and without it you would lose half the audience. Thanks |
| 2022-10-17 06:13:24 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 06 - Losing her Anal Cherry | The de***********ion of her anal deflowering is written excellently. Feels like you are there taking part. Caring and loving but then brings her back to earth with some wand torturing. Makes her feel loved and then reenforces who her master is. Perfect |