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Comments from DeathsKnight
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-08-23 05:07:17 | Who just fucked me? | Great story, would have loved to have had the revelation of Brent's father right at the end, but you pulled it off anyway. On a critical note there isn't much to say, as the mistakes did not even bother. I guess the more critcal peeps will complain about some grammar mistakes, but I will just say good job and keep on writing. |