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Comments from GustavoVzla
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-06-25 22:57:47 | My Doctor Part I Dana and Dennis | Well written ! ! Interesting story. good chances. It is difficult to maintain credibility in future chapters. . . I'm dying to see how you do it! |
| 2020-06-25 23:48:49 | The Dangers Of Being The Designated Driver_(1) | good first story you have potential keep writing your skill will improve with practice I plan to read everything you write in the future |
| 2020-06-26 01:38:08 | Siblings Desire | This story is a little gem. Excellent rhythm, good length, neither too long nor too short, great development. . . After reading dozens of erotic stories in this quarantine, I returned to this by accident and I could not stop rereading it, it is so good that I could not detach myself from it until its end. Now before continuing with the second part, I am setting it as one of my favorites so that I can read it again when I want to read a wonderful erotic romantic story. . . I am already your fan and I plan to read everything you post in the future. |
| 2020-06-26 04:40:20 | A new day, a new me part 1 | I feel ambivalent about this story. It has some very good things but there are things that make me uncomfortable, so as it is a series I am going to give it a try, I am going to continue reading and I will give my opinion when I finish reading, I hope that is at the end of the series. . . I understand that you are a novice writer and I hope you get better along the way. I thank you for having the courage to make your effort public. In relation to haters: forget them, none of them has written more than 10 sentences in a row and they only try to prove to themselves that those who do make an effort are as incapable as they are. |
| 2020-06-30 18:23:18 | Lost In Hazel Eyes Part1 | Wow, great intro looking forward to 2nd part . . . |