| 2019-11-12 06:30:06 |
My Son's Girlfriend Sandra
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Son's reaction? |
| 2019-11-12 06:44:47 |
My Dumb Sister 3
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Hard to keep the blackmail thing a continuing plot line. Think she'd tire of it. |
| 2019-11-20 05:15:50 |
“Daddy, can Paige stay over tonight?”
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Pay attention ti the comments about spelling, Edit this and resubmit; then delete this one. |
| 2019-11-20 05:23:51 |
“Daddy, can Paige stay over tonight?”
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Pay attention ti the comments about spelling, Edit this and resubmit; then delete this one. |
| 2019-11-22 06:15:18 |
Boating Holiday
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I think I only now comma. You need a proof reader for comma placement. Possessive apostrophe occasionally done OK. This detracts forman otherwise good story. |