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Comments from daddy_bare
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-06-11 21:38:10 | Siblings With Privileges (re written) | Nicely done. A little subbing (No, no *that* kind of subbing, I mean sub-editing or proofreading) would have picked up the few minor spelling and punctuation errors. |
| 2008-06-13 11:09:01 | The Hot Tub with Friends | I know this is not Eng-Lit 101, but any story that begins with the eye-rolling cliché of using cum to mean come ... that's as far as I get. |
| 2009-03-12 19:59:17 | Our New Neighbors - Ch04: Maxine's Liberation | You are a writer who knows what your readers want -- and gives it to them in spades! This is becoming a classic of the genre. I am one of the thousands who are eagerly waiting on every new chapter. |
| 2009-03-25 00:33:01 | Family encounters of the sexual kind: the story of an anonymous girl | More ... you have to continue the story. |
| 2009-06-29 20:54:11 | To bring all the threads together Jessica will eventually have to become involved and then the son. One happy, milky family! |