| 2019-05-06 15:12:37 |
PARKER’S EQUINE TRANSPORT
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Cool. Thanks for the positive comments. :-) If you want a girl on girl story, I'll put in a shameless plug for one of my other stories: LEXI AND SASHA -- SORORITY DAZE. Any comments welcome, particularly constructive criticism. How is the "pacing" of my writing? Too much detail? Not enough? Does the dialog work or is it awkward? What works, what doesn't? Help me improve. |
| 2019-07-23 14:41:15 |
THE WITCHES OF WESTMOOR WOODS
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OK, this story just kind of charted its own path into the occult and punishment. Kind of a departure from my previous efforts. I'm wondering, did I go too dark? Comments and critique encouraged -- Lacy |
| 2019-08-15 19:20:22 |
Madison the Intern_(1)
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Vicks: Not for the faint of heart, according to the Googles, but apparently a "thing". Crazy kids these days... |
| 2019-08-29 00:03:35 |
Katie’s dress is too small
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Nicely done. Loved the opening line. :-) |
| 2020-03-29 00:04:27 |
Roscoe's Crush on Megan
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Perhaps you could write the story you're wanting to see? |