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Comments from Wuffles2
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-02-19 01:58:49 | Being More Social - Chapters 16-20 | Megan was best character. Her character development was fucking stellar and her story progression made sense, in a fucked up way. I would have ended up hating Adam if she wasn't there. Paul got screwed - nowhere near enough development on him considering how pivotal he was with the may/Phil situation and the reason why nicole hated him was never really revealed or deserved. Would have liked to see more of the teachers personality or backstory developed a bit more Am surprised and pleased that May didnt try to like commit suicide as a final power play. Was suspicious. Fantastic writing. Inspiring as fuck. Character development like this doesn't happen on this website. 10/10. |
| 2019-02-19 01:59:32 | Being More Social - Chapters 16-20 | That said, The bit about "pooh u dont know how old they actually are" was contrived and cringeworthy. You're writing a piece of YA fiction about high schoolers trying to cope with the effects of sex on their psychology without the life experience needed to do so. Own it, dont put bullshit disclaimers like that in. |
| 2019-02-19 01:59:33 | Being More Social - Chapters 16-20 | That said, The bit about "pooh u dont know how old they actually are" was contrived and cringeworthy. You're writing a piece of YA fiction about high schoolers trying to cope with the effects of sex on their psychology without the life experience needed to do so. Own it, dont put bullshit disclaimers like that in. |
| 2019-03-17 10:39:35 | Pure Strip Poker | Hey dude, thanks for writing these rules! Just letting you know that I've actually adapted a version of these rules for a strip poker night with the members of my local kink scene - Would you like me to post a thing about how it went? The night is on 30 March 2019. I particularly love the part about the hand-reveal and lowest giving an item to the highest ^_^ |
| 2019-10-08 21:04:45 | How Polygamy Begins - 1 | Hey, good job getting your fiction out there. Do you have someone that you can submit your drafts to for edits? Because the way you are writing your dialogue makes the story really hard to read. When someone speaks, you should basically always have a separate line for them. Please, our sanity depends on it. |