2019-01-12 05:26:56 |
His best mate's mum
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Excellant story....the dream of so many teenagers. Oh to be young again and know what you know today. |
2019-01-13 18:04:45 |
My brother changed me
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A good start for your writing but I agree that the paragraphs are too long. The other thing that troubles me,is that, the story is posted in the true story section.....I have a hard time believing that you could be so naive about sex in today's society......so is it just your first attempt at a fictional story? Good luck in your future endeavors. |
2019-01-02 23:38:27 |
My Naughty Aunt May_(0)
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Very erotic, gave me a boner all the way to the end! ;-) |
2019-01-02 23:38:29 |
My Naughty Aunt May_(0)
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Very erotic, gave me a boner all the way to the end! ;-) |
2019-01-02 23:41:09 |
Coaching My Sister_(1)
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Very good, brought back fond memories of the times I had sex with my sister |